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Name: Coin Flip (Shadow Consumption) [Tumbling Bit]
Age at start of 6+1: 16
Hair color: Dark Blue
Mane color: Light Yellow
Eye color: Scarlet
Cutie Mark: Spinning Coin between three stars in a triangle
Special Talent: Luck Manipulation

Name: Golden Sparkle (Birth Name) [Coruscating Flicker]
Age at start of 6+1: 10
Hair color: Muted Gold
Mane color: Royal Blue/Bottle Green
Eye color: Scarlet
Cutie Mark: Not Yet Earned
Special Talent: Not Yet Discovered

Please, just learn the difference between "rules of style" and grammar rules.

Stylistic choices are absolutely up to the author (and for the editor to throw a fit about).

There are way too many fake "editors" and "writers" who have no clue which are which....